अजीब हो गयी दुनिया मेरी

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अजीब हो गयी दुनिया मेरी ,
विचार न मिले किसी  के ,
तो देशद्रोही बना चला वो उसे l

नफरत कि लहर चली अजीब अब ,
दुश्मनो से लड़ते लडते ,
अपनों से लड़ रहे हैं अब l
कल तक लड़ते थे धर्म पे ,
आज लड़ रहे विचारो पे सब l

अजीब हुयी दुनिया मेरी ,
कैसे समजाऊँ इस को अब ,
ना है जो किसी साथी के दिल मे नफरत मेरे ,
देखता है इंसानियत सब मे,
अगर वो जो पहले ,
न दिखता किसी देश, धरम में , दुश्मन अगर उसे  ,
मत बना उसे दुशमन, उस के देश का ही, उसको तू ,
मत नाप तोल नफरत के पैमाने मे उसको तू l

देख मोहब्बत देश के लिये उस में तू ,
मर मिटने का जज़्बा देश के लिये , देख उस में तू ,
 नाप तोल मोहब्बत के पैमाने से जरा उसको तू l

रो दिया जो वो देख दुश्मन का दर्द ,
मरे बच्चों को देख, पाकिस्तान में हुए आतंक में ,
रोया जो दिल उसका,
तो देशद्रोही वो नही l

जो खौला न खून उस का दुशमन को देख ,
जो देख़ कसाब जैसो को, न हुआ मन वहीं मारने का उसे ,
तो देश द्रोही बोल उसे तू l

P.s. I wrote this poem on present scenario of my country, where few ppl think they got right to declare anyone  nationalist or anti nationalist, on base of expression of views of a person, and amount of less hatred that person carry in his/her hearts comparative to these peoples.

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~Sneha

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15 thoughts on “अजीब हो गयी दुनिया मेरी

      1. Thank u for your generous like and encouraging words, I am really glad you liked it ..
        Thank u for stopping by and giving me chance to see your work too.
        Really liked your writing style, will really admit mine is not as finely framed as your’s, yet you admire my work so really thanks a ton.

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      2. First of all thank you so much for your kind words….😇😇
        Its about the writing style and really i liked the way u r narrating ur thoughts.

        Thank you so much for going through my posts ….hope u will like them.

        Keep writing dear and keep smiling☺️

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  1. Hi expressingwings!
    I liked your idea and presentation, but I beg to differ and disagree on the ideological front. If someone is talking and taking part in anti national activities , then he or she must be called as anti national. If one shouts Bharat tere tukde honge and show the secessionist tendency, we can’t tell them as nationalist.

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    1. We all have different views, no offence, respect to all, here I tried to convey same not talking about the hatred and I believe no Indian will ever pass a slogan like that, here I wrote it picturing the soldier daughter who was badly presented, trolled and hated for her view, where she didn’t talk anything about nation but about war, and it’s not a new thing but talked in literature since ages, she just put it in other words ” dushman NE nahe, humey dushmani NE Mara ”
      If you you could understand the depth of it , you might feel sorry too for trolling and calling antinationalist to such an intellectual youth of a country.
      My this work was just to make understand people not to impose , their thoughts, their ideology & their interpretation on ppl.

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      1. I understood your point. But that girl is part and parcel of the propaganda which is generated by so called left wing intellectuals. War has killed his father, I agree, but has he imposed the war, has India imposed the war, No?
        What should India do when it is being attacked? Should India remain silent? Should we bear all the onslaught? No
        However I agree that she has the right to express her opinion and that can be discussed, but she can’t be termed as anti national.

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      2. I respect your views but left wing , right wing whatever all it is, Just a thing here difference of opinion don’t give anyone right to tag anyone as antinationalist, we are country of respecting the diversity in all form, we are known for respecting and understanding all people, By this new air of imposing of interpretation of thoughts and following them blindly we causing problem to our brothers and sisters only.
        With due respect if you want to discuss further on same you can connect with me on Drsnehatiwari@gmail.com

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      3. Thank you for sharing your contact ID, however these topics can lead to endless debate and discussion, Hence I am leaving this topic for now. Anyway it was a good post to read.

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      4. Yes, endless debate they are that’s why share the ID to discuss further if want , as thought this is just a platform for expressing not discussion.
        And thank you for your unbiased views and dropping the appreciating and encouraging words for my work.
        I am glad you like them 🙂

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