“Agar unhey bhee mohabaat thodi si hum se hum jaisi hoti,
to zindagi ki dastaan aaj aur kuch hoti .
Na hum tadaptey apni tanhayi me,
na wo banjarey hotey in mohabaat ki raahon me,
do adhoorey poorey hotey,
bas unhey bhee agar thodi si mohabaat hum se hum jaisi hoti.
ENGLISH TRANSLATION
If he had felt for me the way I for him,
Than story of life would have been different,
Neither I would have been in a lonesome pain, neither he would be wandering for love in a nomad shoes ,
Two incomplete would be complete,
if only he had loved me the way I loved him ..
~sneha
p.c. google
Lovely👍👌
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Thank u 🙂
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👌👍
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Lovely piece of writing 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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BEautiful lines .. I have written a Gazal on the same tone and meter.. do you want to read it. ?
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Thank you 🙂 , yes sure. Send me the link if possible.
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Okay I will.
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It might take some time to dig out the old lines buried somewhere underneath binary code in my laptop. I will post it though. Real soon and tag you the link.
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ok,no prob, thanks.
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Hey I have posted that ghazal under the title ‘मेरी ख़्वाहिश’। you can read the whole thing and a lot many more poetry and ghazals in Hindi/Urdu on this address.
http://www.saharshairi.wordpress.com
It is my blog.
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ohh ok, thank you, surly i will.
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Reblogged this on Whispers of Immortality and commented:
Something to read.. Beautiful lines..
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Thank u Mayank, it’s rly kind of honour to me, touched..
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The honour is mine. We should all share and contribute and support each other.
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🙂 , Yes, sure…
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Nice lines, i understand both hindi and english and i have to say both are amazing to read! – Cezane
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Thank you Cezane 🙂
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Beauty in words…great with “agar”
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Thank you 🙂
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Plzzzz view my blog
https://kumarankblog.wordpress.com/
It would be my pleasure to hear ur views….
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Sure, pleasure will be mine .
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